Englisch Aufstze schreibenIm Laufe deiner Schulzeit werden die Texte, die du in Englisch schreibst, immer umfangreicher. Achte aber darauf, dass deine Stze nicht auch immer komplizierter werden. Besser ist es in einfachen, verstndlichen Stzen zu schreiben. Wichtig ist es eine bestimmte Vorgehensweise zum Verfassen von Texten anzuwenden bzw.

anzutrainieren (hnlich wie im Deutschunterricht). Das hilft dir bei der Textgestaltung und mit ein wenig bung sparst du damit eine Menge Zeit Unterhalb angefhrt sind nun einige Punkte die dir dabei helfen knnen. 1. Den Text durchlesen (meist ist es besser das mehr als ein Mal zu tun, weil dir beim zweiten Mal Dinge du bersehen hast eher auffallen oder du Stze besser verstehst). Hast du alles verstanden?

JA: mache dir eine Stoffsammlung z.B. in Form eines Mindmappings (siehe Seite 2)

NEIN: unterstreiche od. markiere die Wrter die dir unklar sind und schlage sie im Wrterbuch nach. Wenn du Probleme mi tStzen hast bitte deine Eltern / Geschwister / Freunde /... um Hilfe.

2. Ordne deine Stichwortsammlung. berlege dir: was passt in die Einleitung, was in den Hauptteil und was in den Schluss? Wichtig ist jedenfalls, dass du dich an die grundlegenden Fragen hltst: WER? /WAS? /WO? /WANN? /WARUM? Einleitung: worum geht es? Was willst du im Text aussagen? Kurzer berblick was du im Text besprechen mchtest. Hauptteil: Gliederung in mehrere Abstze mit einem wichtiger Gedanke pro Absatz (ist meist ein Satz) und dann schreibst du noch ein paar Stze dazu. Abschluss: dein Fazit, dein abschlieender Gedanke, vielleicht nochmals eine kurze Zusammenfassung der wichtigsten Punkte mit deiner persnlichen Meinung dazu. 3. Lies dir deinen geschriebenen Text mehrmals durch. Achte auf die Wortstellung (Word Order) in den Stzen. Achte auf Schreibfehler. Hast du die Fehler korrigiert und ist alle gut zu lesen?

JA: dann bist du jetzt fertig und kannst den Text abgeben :-)

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Beispiel: MindmappingTask (Angabe) My home town

Sights (St. Stephens Catehdral, Schnbrunn, Hofburg, Riesenrad, Prater, Danube Tower, Parliament, Ring-Street, States Opera, Karlskirche, Palmhouse, Carnuntum, Krtnerstrae, House of Music, etc.)

my home town Viennain summer (if the weather is nice) Donauinsel nice food and cocktails, nice music from all over the world

typical viennese coffee house (Demel, Sacher, Hawelka, etc.) in winter Christmas market (, in front of Schnbrunn, Spittelberg, in front of the town hall, etc.)

different parks (if the weather is nice) Wienerwald (Lainzer Tiergarten), Schnbrunn, Stadtpark, Burggarten, Donaupark, Prater, Botanischer Garten der Univ. Wien, etc. things you can do in the evening

shopping cheap and easy: Mariahilfer Strae, Donauzentrum mall, Shopping City Sd mall luxury and expensive: Krtner Strae, Graben

Cinema (generally: Apollo Kino, Cinneplex trendy and different (some new and UCI Kinowelt; summer: cinema at the meadow Krieau, cinema at the roof of the, main Library, cinema in the Augarten park) theater and classical music (Viennese Mozart-Concerts, Viennese Boys choire, Viennese concert hall, Folkopera, etc.) discos / bars: Ice-Bar Vienna, Keiko both directly located at the U-Bahnyoung fashionable designers): Neubaugasse

Bgen (beneath the underground nr. 6); several bars and disco Empire at the Bermuda-Dreieck (just a few minutes away from Sweden Place [undergournd nr. 4]; Andagio (Millennium City), etc. Heuriger typical austrian type of restaurant owned by a vitner / wine grower thats a MUST for every Tourist

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Beispiel: Writing a textTask (Angabe) My home town

Vienna is a beautiful old town thats really worth visiting it. If you plan a trip to Austria or especially our capital city, you should at least come for three days or longer. There are a lot of intersting sights to visit and of course there is much more you can do. This city is full of culture, possibilities to make sport, traditional coffee houses and nices places in general. But now lets start our walk trough Vienna, where I will give you further information. I think the famous sights of Vienna are the most interesting things for tourists. You can either take the yellow Tourist tramway that circles around the ring, take one of the tourist buses or walk around by joining one of the guided tours trough the inner city. Of course you can also walk around by yourself. I suggest to start at the downtown. If you need to go by public transport you can take the underground (nr. 1 or nr. 3) to Stepansplatz and visit St. Stephans Cathedral. There are different possibilities when visiting the church: you can walk up to one of the churchs tower, take the elevator up to the other tower or go to the catacombs beneath the cathedral. At lunch time I suggest a typical Heurigen Restaurant. It is just behind the cathedral and is called Figlmller. This restaurant is famous for its typical delicious austrian food. Afterwards you walk down the Krtnerstrae a huge expensive but beautifull shopping street. At the end of the street you will find the States Opera. If you like to, you can go inside and take part at the guided tour. Otherwise you can get on the Tourist Tramway and circle around the Ring-Street with its beautifull buildings. You can get off any place you want to. In the afternoon, if you need a break, you should go to one of Viennas typical coffe houses like Sacher, Demel or Hawelka. Austria (or especially Vienna) is famous for them and I am sure you will like the cakes :-). If the weather is nice there are two other famous tourist attractions you really should visit on the next day and the day after. The first one is Schnbrunn Castle. Its the place where our emperor and his family used to live. Its surrounded by a beautifull park. If you walk up the strenuous way to the Gloriette it will be rewarded with a magnificent view over Vienna. One thing I really like is the maze that was reopened a few years ago. Its really funny to walk trough it and find the right way to the exit. You can have your lunch at the restaurant located in the center of Schnbrunns zoo. It is the world oldest Zoo and you will need a lot of time which is rewarded with funny animal shows and interesting information about Nina Rattan Seite 3 von /from 6HAUPTTEIL 1. Absatz Sehenswrdigkeiten Einleitung: worum geht es?

the animals. The zoo is located right next to the castle. In the evening I would suggest you to have dinner at the danube tower. Its a quite huge tower with a rotary restaurant. While eating, you will see the lights of Vienna with additional information of the buildings you see. After two interesting days there is still much more to see. If the weather is nice again I would suggest to visit the Prater, an old amusement park. Next to its famous attractions it is also a nice place to take a rest and walk around in the surounding park. At the entrance you will find the Riesenrad. If you still dont have enough from Viennas beautifull view and want to enjoy it once more you can go on a ride. By the way, the Riesenrad was part of the world fair, at the beginning of the 20th century, where the Eiffel-Tower was shown as well. After enjoying an intersting day you will probably wonder if there is anything to do in the evening and I can tell you: yes there is quite a lot. In summer, when the weather is usually nice, you can spend a nice evening at one of Viennas outdoor cinemas in Augarten Park, at the roof of the main library or just at Kriau meadow. As Austrias States Opera is very famous you could also check if you get tickets for an opera. If you prefere operetta there are a few nice places like the summer stage of Baden, a small town very close to Vienna, or Mrbisch. You can get on a bus that brings you to this place in Burgenland and carries you home afterwards. It is famous because, its a stage based on the water of lake Neusiedel. A lot of tourists are interested in Viennese Mozart concerts and in concerts of the famous Viennes boys choire. Of course I understand that not everyone likes theater. Therefore you could also go to one of Viennas bars or restaurans. In summer there are some pretty cool ones like Sand in the City, Hermanns Strandbar or Badeschiff. There is also the Bermuda-Dreieck, which is a part of Vienna where a lot of bars are and it is a place especially for young people. Also very nice are the ICE-Bar Vienna and the Keiko. But dont think Viennas nice in summer only. In winter I deeply suggest the different christmas markets of Vienna like the ones in front of the town hall or of Schnbrunn Castle and Spittellberg. They are very beautifull and are really worth visiting them, because they spread a special kind of christmas feeling and the glogg is really great! I am sure you are wondering what shopping is like in Vienna. There are different possibilities. You can either go to Mariahilferstrae, this is a long shopping street with different shops that you may find in any other city, or to one of the big shopping malls like Donauzentrum and Shopping City Sd. If you are looking for trendy and modern2. Absatz Abendgestaltung

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things made from you designers I suggest to go to Neubaugasse which is a neighbouring street of Mariahilfer Strae.

Krtnerstrae and Grabe are shopping streets in the first district, but they are specialized on luxury and quite expensive things.

Shopping is nice and can be relaxing, but there are much more things you can do in Vienna. One thing is sports. If the weathers nice you can go to the Donauinsel, where you can either rent a bike or a pedal boat. Of course you could also go to the high ropes course if you are free from giddiness. Some people tend to swim in the danube, but thats something I wouldnt suggest, because it is quite dirty, but to do sports on the water is quite harmless. If you like windsurfing than there are two possibilities. Either you go to the lido Alte Donau, where you can rent an equipment or take part in a course, or you take the train to lake Neusiedl. This takes about one hour and there are a lot of windsurf-rentals. Its also a place where some professional windsurfers are training and where the world-championship is held every year.4. Absatz Sport in und um Wien

There is so much to do in Vienna. It is really a beautiffl town and its really worth seeing it. As every holiday ends faster than you like you should concentrate on the things you really like to do The best time for a visit is summer. If you plan a trip to our beautifull city you should take a few days to have enough time for the most important sightseeings, the beautiful parks, the big amount of cultural things like concerts and the different theaters, big shopping streets and of course the different forms of sports activities. I suggest you to make a short plan, in which you point out what you absolutely want to visit. Then you will see how much time you will need. I am sure you will like our capital city because it offers different things for all kind of free-time activities. The only thing, thats left to say now, is to wish you a pleaseant stay. Have a nice time.Abschlu: was ist dein Fazit (Ergebnis)? Kurze Zusammenfassung und Fazit angeben

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